You are …

You are

The hot chocolate blend

I’ve been searching for

All this time.

You are

The sunshine

In my garden,

The sparrow-man to my fairy.

You are

The sprinkles on top

A bad day.

You are

The sparkle in my eyes.

You are

The blanket and a bowl of soup,

In foul weather and bad times.

You are my North Star

In the night’s sky.

You are my one

And only.

Now say that

You love me

Seal it with your sweet kiss and

Make my day.

© Devina S.

I’ve been experimenting with this style, few words in a line, for some time and I think this one is the best one so far that I’m confident to share. There’s a sharpness in brevity, in both length and width, the nonet format has shown me this and I even think I might try a haiku!

mmwaah!

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13 responses to “You are …

  1. I love these kinds of poems. Well done! And sure you should definitely try haiku!

  2. I posted , have a look please, if you don’t like the pic or anything else, I can change that 🙂
    http://thepassionatehearts.blogspot.com/2013/04/you-are-devina-s.html

  3. Really wonderful poem 😀
    Can you post /write /share or send me some of your sweet poems for my blogger ?-)
    kindly have a Visit there and write your sweet reply my friend 🙂
    http://thepassionatehearts.blogspot.com/
    Happy Sunday 🙂

  4. First time I’ve read your poetry mi querida amiga and It certainly is sweet 🙂

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