You are
The hot chocolate blend
I’ve been searching for
All this time.
You are
The sunshine
In my garden,
The sparrow-man to my fairy.
You are
The sprinkles on top
A bad day.
You are
The sparkle in my eyes.
You are
The blanket and a bowl of soup,
In foul weather and bad times.
You are my North Star
In the night’s sky.
You are my one
And only.
Now say that
You love me
Seal it with your sweet kiss and
Make my day.
© Devina S.
I’ve been experimenting with this style, few words in a line, for some time and I think this one is the best one so far that I’m confident to share. There’s a sharpness in brevity, in both length and width, the nonet format has shown me this and I even think I might try a haiku!
I love these kinds of poems. Well done! And sure you should definitely try haiku!
Thanks, Daphne! I’m yet to try my hand at it.
I posted , have a look please, if you don’t like the pic or anything else, I can change that 🙂
http://thepassionatehearts.blogspot.com/2013/04/you-are-devina-s.html
Oh, delicious! Je t’adore.
Merci!
Really wonderful poem 😀
Can you post /write /share or send me some of your sweet poems for my blogger ?-)
kindly have a Visit there and write your sweet reply my friend 🙂
http://thepassionatehearts.blogspot.com/
Happy Sunday 🙂
I’m pleased you thought so! Of course 🙂 , if you see any of my other poems that you would like to re post go ahead just make sure you send me a link to it 😉 I’ll send you some later, happy Sunday to you too, it’s rainy over here today.
You are such a nice friend , thank you so much – I am willing your this poem “You are…”, Is it okay ? ,
That’s fine by me, and you’re very welcome 🙂
Thanks once again, when I post, I’ll send you link , I am waiting when you are going to be the reader of that blog also 🙂 Be smiling and enjoy rainy days my friend 🙂
First time I’ve read your poetry mi querida amiga and It certainly is sweet 🙂
Only the first time? I’ve written over forty but I think the reason why you haven’t seen much is because I publish all of them on Poets’ Corner, and I seldom re-post them here. I should do more here … Thank you, Andy 🙂 🙂
mmmmm! well I am hereby making requests for more here 🙂 🙂